初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

时间:2025-03-25

篇1:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

初三中考英语复习讲座:写作篇

  优秀水平标准

  1.        能准确运用词汇和句型结构,较生动和详细地描述情境或叙述所给话题,能准确自如地表达态度和感情。

  2.        能用流畅的语言组织常见体裁的短文,逻辑清楚,结构完整,层次清晰,内容充实,问题恰当。

  3.        能在写作中恰当地引用资料,能用谚语、俗语等,能清楚地阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点,具有一定的人文意识。

  内容分(7分)

  是否紧扣主题,是否涉及到所要求的几个方面

  学会审题(写人物,写事件,写物件,写场所,写感想)

         To be a lovely Shanghainese (做一个可爱的上海人)

            Leaving school (毕业时分)

            Growing pains and gains (成长的烦恼与快乐)

            I have a dream (我有一个梦想)

            Things I hate to do (我不喜欢……)

            Love around me (我身边的爱)

            I want to do something for my school (我想为学校做点事)

            I am proud of myself  (我为自己感到骄傲)

  Chinglish

  1.        I want to buy a present for every taught me teacher.

  2.        School’s cleaning is everyone’s face. So our face must be cleaned every day.

  3.        I is very confidence I can eat five chicken everyday.

  4.        Sometime the playground are pieces of paper. Some students look like no see.

  5.        I want to clean the fans, the fans are tall, but I’m not short, so it’s easily.

  常见错误

  1.        句型单一

  2.        东拉西扯

  3.        时态错误

  4.        用词不当

  5.        结构松散

  6.        脱离主题

  7.        字迹潦草

  怎样改进写作

  1.        学习写作的步骤和方法

  2.        学会套题的技巧和思路

  3.        用好题目的提示和问题

  4.        使用点睛之句和习语谚语

  5.        3+1的综合写作模式

  套题的技巧和思路

  Water

  Water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. Fix any leaky tap and take a shorter shower. Don’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

  Things I hate to do        我不喜欢……    (07中考作文)

  Suggestions:

  1.        What are the things you hate to do?

  2.        What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least two reasons)

  You can begin like this :

  Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate doing, such as …

  Things I hate to do

  Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate doing, such as littering or jay-walking. And something I hate doing most is to waste water because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. Fix any leaky tap and take a shorter shower. Don’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

  Something most I’d like to do        我最想做……  (杨浦区08学年初三期中考作文)

  Suggestions:

  1.        What is the thing that you’d most like to do?

  2.        Why would you like to do it most? (give at least two reasons)

  Something most I’d like to do is to save and protect water resources, because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we mustn’t waste the water resources. We should fix any leaky tap and take a shorter shower. And we also can’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

  An Unforgettable Thing                  一件难忘的事    (杨浦区07学年初三期中考作文)

  Suggestions:

  1.        When and where did it happen?

  2.        Why do you think it unforgettable?

  You can begin like this

  Everybody has something forgettable. For me … was such a story.

  Everybody has something forgettable. For me, an English lesson about water resources was such a story. Last Friday we had an English lesson. From the lesson I knew that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. After class we all promised to save and protect water resources. The lesson is so important that I’ll remember it forever.

  On my way to school  上学路上  (杨浦区07学年模拟考作文)

  Suggestions:

  1.        I saw … on my way to school.

  2.        a fire hydrant (消防龙头) was leaking

  3.        call the firemen

  4.        ask … to fix the leaky hydrant

  5.        be late for school

  6.        be happy

  Yesterday on my way to school I saw a fire hydrant was leaking. I was very worried because I knew that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. I immediately called the firemen and asked them to fix the leaky hydrant. After that, I went to school. Although I was late, I felt very happy.

  A story about my parents       爸爸妈妈的故事         (上海试运转作文)

  Suggestions:

  1.        take every opportunity to …

  2.        if the tap is leaky …

  3.        when they brush …

  4.        told me …

  My parents always take every opportunity to save water. If the tap is leaky, they will fix it at once. When they brush their teeth, they never let the tap run. They often tell me that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. From their words I learned the importance of saving water. I think although my parents are ordinary people, they are real heroes in my heart.

  I want to do something for my school     我想为学校做点事     (中考作文)

  Suggestions:

  1.        What do you want to do for your school?

  2.        Why do you want to do it?

  3.        How are you going to do it?

  用好题目的提示和问题

  中考作文

  Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream.”

  Sentence patterns for reference:

  1.        My dream is to be …/ to do…/to go …

  2.        I enjoy…/ like …/prefer…

  3.        To make my dream come true, I …

  4.        If my dream comes true, …

  My dream is to be a teacher. I think that the students are very lovely. To make my dream come true, I will study harder. I will read more books in order to broaden my mind and enrich my knowledge. It goes without saying that No pains, no gains. Practice makes perfect. If my dream comes true, I’ll treat my students as my best friends.

  Everybody has his own dream. My dream is to be a tour guide. Some people may think it’s tiring to be a tour guide. But I don’t think so because I can visit many places of interest around the world and I can learn different culture and customs. Besides, I can also meet different people in different places. So I really want to be a guide. It is an exciting job. To make my dream come true, I must study geography well. I think through my hard work, my dream will come true in the future.

  中考作文

  Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Things I Hate to Do.”

  Use the following points as a guide.

  1.        What are the things that you hate to do?

  2.        What do you hate doing most? Why ? (Give at least two reasons)

  Things I hate to do

  Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate to do …

  Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate to do. I hate to keep pets and tell lies. The things that I hate doing most is smoking. As we all know, smoking is not only bad for ourselves not also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes, I feel rather sick. Besides, it is a waste of money to smoke, I think. What’s more, smoking pollutes the air. So I hate smoking most.

  中考作文

  Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Love around me”

  Use the following points as a guide.

  1.        Is there any love around you?

  2.        How do you feel when you get love from him/ her/ them?

  3.        What are you going to do to show your love?

  (1)There is love around me. For example, my mother took good care of me when I was sick every day. What’s more, she always buy a lot of drinks and food I like for me, as well as many toys. She also helps with my study so that I can make great progress. Thus (2)I feel deeply moved. I’m thankful to her for the things she did for me these years. So I have made up my mind that (3)I will work harder at my study to show my love to her.

  It’s widely accepted that everyone needs love. And (1)I think there is always love around me. My parents show love to me by looking after me well. My classmates’ help make me feel their love. (2)I am so moved that words can’t express how much I love them! So I will (3)spare no effort to help my parents do the housework and help my classmates in return. Finally, I really want to say thanks to them from the bottom of my heart.

  I’m a lucky teenager because (1)there is a lot of love around me. For example, my parents love me very much. They encouraged me to be brave when I failed to pass the 800-meter race last term. I’m very thankful to them. Their love makes me (2)feel warm and powerful. In order to my love, I’m going (3)to help them with the housework. This will enable them have more time to rest. Love around me is great.

  Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I’m proud of myself.”

  Use the following points as a guide.

  1.        What kind of person are you?

  2.        What makes you proud yourself? (Give an example/ examples)

  3.        Why are you proud yourself?

  (1)I’m a sunny boy with confidence and the joy of life. As a music lover, (2)playing the piano makes me proud of myself. Every day, I often play the piano for a while to relax myself. Also, my family members quite enjoy the wonderful melodies. I believe music is of great power. And playing the piano enables me to learn the joy of life. (3)So, I am proud of myself because I bring happiness to my family as well as myself by playing the piano.

  (1)I’m person who is always confident and ready to try anything new. However, swimming has once been a nightmare for me after falling into the water. (2)When I finally ruled the water around my body, I felt rather proud of myself. At the beginning of the swimming test, I took a deep breath and then jumped into the water. Fears disappeared when I went straight ahead. (3)I reached the wall in the end full of joy and pride. Since then, I realized the meaning of the saying, ‘Nothing ventured, Nothing gained’!

  (1)I’m a common student who has the most ordinary face and the most extraordinary personality. I am proud of myself (2)because of my confidence and kindness, especially my strong will. There is a saying, ‘Nothing is impossible.’ This powerful sentence is inspiring. So I meet a trouble, I won’t give up. Instead I fight against it bravely. (3)The strong personality makes me be proud of myself. I have already got ready. Let me give the future a big smile.

  (1) used to be a shy girl, but after that experience, I have become more and more confident. (2)It was my turn to give a speech to the whole class on how to learn English well. At first, I’m afraid that I nearly wanted to ask the teacher if I could give up the chance. However, I told myself that I should give myself a challenge because it was really necessary for a person to be confident. I prepare a lot and encouraged myself much. At last, to my great happiness, (3)the speech was perfectly successful. I’m proud of myself (3)because I am no longer a shy girl. I’ve changed myself to a girl who is full of confidence.

  3+1的写作模式

  3 = 对三个问题的完整回答

  + = 对某个重点问题的扩写

  1 = 点睛之句的点题和收尾

  The most important things in my life

  Use the following points as a guide

  1.        What are the most important things in your life?

  2.        Which one do you think is the most important thing?

  3.        Why do you think so?

  (student’s writing)

  There are many important things in my life, such as my eyesight, my subject. Now, the most important thing in my life is the test in June. If I do well in it, I will study in a good school, but if I do badly in it, I will study in a school that I don’t want. It’s very important, I think. (62 字)

  点评:内容空乏,选材俗套,结构不严谨,缺乏立意深刻的中心思想的表达。

  1.        What are the most important things in your life?

  Learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important thing in my life.

  2.        Which one do you think is the most important thing?

  I think learning to share is the most important.

  3.        Why do you think so?

  It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.

  There are always many important things that may happen in our life. Among them, Learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important thing in my life. I think learning to share is the most important. “Share” is another word for “exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others. As a famous saying goes: One flower makes no garden, so we should learn to share with others.

  注意:

  1.        审题要切中题意

  2.        描述要条理清楚

  3.        表达要语句通顺

  4.        书写要清晰规范

  5.        身份要绝对避免

篇2:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

初三英语写作开头万能公式

1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言

有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!

原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?

经典句型:

A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

更多经典句型:

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计

原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.

看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:

Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

篇3:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

通过对近些年英语作文出题的趋势来看, 对英语写作的考察更偏重于交际情景设置和不同体裁的要求,但是由于客观和种种主观原因,很多同学的作文容易走入种种误区,这些误区主要体现在以下方面:

一、构思、准备不充分,匆忙下笔

任何一篇作文出题都是有它独特的道理的,所以提前审题和构思就显得必不可少了。很多孩子目前存在一个情况,想到哪写到哪,有记流水帐的习惯;这也造成了作文杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现写错单词和用错句型的情况。针对这种情况可以从以下几个方面予以解决:

1、认真审题,审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。

2、确定文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的。

3、列提纲,打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。

二、中心重点不突出,切题不准确

英语写作不是语文散文(形散神不散),写英语作文,尤其是在中考大压力下短时内写出高分作文一定要注意这一点。造成这种情况的主要原因是动笔前并没有认真审题和思考,对出题者希望得到的预期尚未揣摩透彻,这也就造成了一些同学虽然语言功底非常不错,但是最终的结果还是没有拿到一个自己预期的心理分数,最大的问题就出在切题不准确或者不够突出中心上了。

三、忽视文化差异

我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。

四、忽视细节,无谓失分

很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉"下笔如有神",但最终结果出来后大惑不解。这方面的问题主要体现在忽视标点、书写、段落安排、大小写的问题,所以只要更加注重细节,这些无谓失分就可以解决。

篇4:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

相信正在学英语的同学们常会有这样的感受,明明是背了很多的单词,可写作文时,总是用一些最普通的词汇,为了帮助同学们的英语写作增添文采,老师们总结了一些常用词汇的替代语,希望对大家的写作有所帮助:

普通词汇1:help

典型例句:I'll help you .

替代语 accomodate E.g: I'll endeavour to accomodate you.

普通词汇2: helpful

典型例句:Sth is helpful (to sb)

替代语 conducive E.g Sth is conducive to sb

再给出两个有用的短语:

time-honored 时代赋予的

do credit to our forbears 继承先辈的优秀传统

普通词汇3:show

典型例句:as it shows in the picture

替代语 betray

普通词汇4:think

典型例句:I think ---- ----

替代语deem

普通词汇5:ugly

典型例句:xxx is ugly

替代语 hideous

普通词汇6:by the way

典型例句:by the way,....

替代语 incidentally,....

普通词汇7: because

典型例句:xxx because xxx

替代语 in that/in as much as E.g: xxx because xxx

普通词汇8: consider

典型例句: We must consider xxx

替代语: allow for E.g : We must allow for xxx

普通词汇9: much

典型例句: there has been a much increase in the world population

替代语:there has been a drastic increase in the -----

普通词汇10: about

典型例句:it is about 250 times of that

替代语 it is approximately ---

普通词汇11: buy

替代语purchase

篇5:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

怎样写好文章的开头

开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相,它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好,就意味着有了良好的开端,也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done,我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?

1. “开门见山”式开头

一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

①. 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

②. 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……

2. 回忆性开头

在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

3. 疑问性开头

在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

4. 倒叙式开头

在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.

篇6:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

总复习之写作篇3

3.The favorite subject

?我们在学校学习很多课程,如数学、语文、英语、体育…在这些课程当中我最喜欢…因为…在这门课中我学会了…

?词汇:subject, among, language, foreign culture, sound, improve, host, the Olympic Games, useful, top,

?句型:like… best,… because…;

not only… but also…

?how to do…,sound adj

be different from,with one’s help

?It’s known…,must be…,make up mind to do sth.

范文1.

I am a middle school student. I study many subjects at school. There are Chinese, maths, English, PE and so on. Among them, I like English best, because in class I can not only learn how to use the language but also know some foreign culture. Sometimes they sound interesting, for they are quite different from ours. With the teachers’ help, my English has improved a lot. It’s known that Beijing is going to host the Olympic Games. At that time, English must be the most useful language in our city. I have made up my mind to learn English well and be the top student in English learning. 王可

范文2.

?We can learn many subjects in our school, such as Chinese, English, physics, history and so on. Even though I like all the subjects, my favourite is history. History is so interesting that I will never forget it. It usually takes me a lot of time to read the books on history. From the books I have learnt about the development of human beings. I think history is the best of all the subjects.(肖宇)

篇7:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

1.Organize your thoughts before writing: brainstorm、make an outline、etc. 下笔前整合思绪:脑力激荡,写出纲要等。

2.Write clearly. Be concise. Avoid wordiness. 写作清晰,务必精简,避免赘言。

3.Use good grammar and write complete sentences. 使用好的文法,写出完整句子。

4.Write simple sentences. Avoid a fancy style. 尝试简单句,避免花俏的句法。

5.Avoid slang、cliche and informal words. 避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字。

6.Avoid use of the first person (i.e. I/me/my) unless necessary to specific piece.除非必要,避免使用第一人称:如“我/我的”。

7.Writing naturally. Read it aloud. Does it sound natural? Does it flow? 自然挥洒,大声朗诵。整篇文章听起来自然吗?通顺吗?

8.Move logically from one idea to the next. Don't skip steps. 上下句意要合乎逻辑。别毫无章法乱跳。

篇8:初三学生中考英语写作技巧与策略

总复习之写作篇

总复习之写作篇,作文训练集中营(题目)

俗话说,熟读唐诗三百首,不会做诗也会吟,英语写作也是如此。命题者为了让考生有话可写,必然会涉及中学生身边熟悉的生活,包括人物和事件。只要我们对这些内容的写作都能熟练掌握,相信在考场作文的时候必然会得心应手。

1.体育锻练(sports)

?作为一名初三的学生,我们每天进行体育锻炼,如做操、打篮球…因为运动能增强体质,减少疾病。运动使大脑休息,使复习效果更好。通过体育锻炼我…在今后我要…

?词汇:Junior Three, do sports, morning exercises, take exercise, health, healthy, relax, strong, necessary, kinds of

?句型:such as, so on, I think…, Doing…;so that…;become… and …;It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.;… because…

范文1. As a Grade 3 student, we have sports every day, such as doing some exercise, playing basketball and so on. We do sports because it can not only make us strong and but also keep us healthy. It can also make us have a good rest and study better. So I will keep doing sports every day from now on.

范文2. As a middle school student of Junior Three, I do sports one or two hours a day, such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running and so on. I think it is very helpful to me. Taking exercise makes me healthier so that I won’t be ill very often. What’s more, I also get myself relaxed in different kinds of sports, and then I do the better job in my study in high spirit. By doing physical exercise, I’m becoming stronger and more confident than before. I think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day because people’s health is essential in modern life.

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